Corrine McCormick

[girl]

Thanks again.

[Annabel Caldwell]

Appearance: Please fix to where you're not using 'You' all the time. Saying 'You' to the reader is insulting. Describe her appearance without using the reader.

Occupation: I believe you need to hold at least an Associate's degree to be a teacher's assistant, or at least pass a test to gain a substitute teacher's license. I just looked it up, and in NY you at least need to be pursuing a career in teaching.

Personality and Skills: How did she develop the acting talent? Did she make believe a lot as a child? Did she lie a lot as a child? How did this develop?

History: I believe Corrine would be referred to as 'Latin,' not 'blended stuff.'
Since she was born in 1959, her father would be unable to study landscapes online, as there is no internet.
Why did her parents just want the unborn baby able to run for the president? If both of Corrine's parents were American citizens and she and her brother were born abroad, they're still able to run for president as long as her parents file the correct papers.
So she didn't hit puberty, but got breasts anyway? I'm sorry, either she hit puberty or she didn't. And why add this fact into history? It's unneeded.
What exactly made Corrine's sweet nature disappear? Was it the stress of puberty? What was it? Why did she suddenly turn into a very abrasive youth?
So for the weeks that Corrine was depressed, did her mother just sit in the recliner with no help? How did her mother not starve to death or die of dehydration if she couldn't get up without assistance?
From Corrine's personality, it doesn't appear that she's stealthy, so why aren't the cops after her for randomly killing an old woman? Did she have the presence of mind to be careful? Why aren't the police after her for all of her killings? Is she wanted for murder?

Affiliation: I just want to make sure I get this: She's a villain because she has serial killer-like tendencies at people who are cruel to others?